Wanting

6 Dec

#fridayfictioneers via rochelle – 12/06

December 5, 2013

Every Wednesday Romero Wisoff-Fields posts a picture prompt challenging writers to create a 100-word story, poem, or whatever works for you.  After posting your work on your blog,  go back to her site and add your link on her Friday Fictioneers post.  Place.  Page.

Rochelle Wisoff-Fields-Addicted to Purple

Photo Copyright :  Trespass – Randy Maize

“Mommy, do you think I can go out to play?”

“Not today, little one.  It looks like rain.”

“But rain is fun.”

“Not today.  You might catch a cold.”

“But colds are nice too.”

“They are?”

“Yes.”

The sweet smell of rain filters in as small droplets begin to hit the planks of wood shielding the windows.

“Rebecca.”

“Yes mamma.”

“Why are colds nice?”

“Because when I get a cold you tell me stories, give me warm milk, and sing songs.”

“Oh”

“Can I go out tomorrow?”

“We’ll see.”

“I hope tomorrow comes soon.”

“You do?”

“Yes, mommy, I do.”

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12 Responses to “Wanting”

  1. patrickprinsloo December 8, 2013 at 11:04 am #

    Sweet. Love like that is to be treasured.

    • Tad December 21, 2013 at 7:19 pm #

      Thank you.

  2. rochellewisoff December 8, 2013 at 12:01 pm #

    Dear Dandelion,

    I think welcome to Friday Fictioneers are in order. And a sweet story and believable dialogue.
    Note: the “Romero” thing is a joke with Rich. He comes up with different names for me all the time.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    • Tad December 21, 2013 at 7:17 pm #

      Thank you.
      I should have known Rich was only being silly 😉

  3. sustainabilitea December 9, 2013 at 12:42 am #

    The child’s comments sounds so real, Dandelion. Welcome.

    janet

    • Tad December 21, 2013 at 7:18 pm #

      Thanks, I try.

  4. brainsnorts December 10, 2013 at 4:06 am #

    love listening to a mother and child talk about life. well done. also, when calling someone “mamma” or “mommy” such as with “hi mommy” or “mamma said it’s time to get home.” it gets capitalized, unless preceded by an article or pronoun, such as, “that’s my mommy” or “where is your mamma?” then, no caps.

    • Tad December 21, 2013 at 7:18 pm #

      Yes dear, thank you for correcting me.

  5. calipatti December 10, 2013 at 5:33 am #

    Sweet!

    • Tad December 21, 2013 at 7:18 pm #

      Thank you.

  6. helenmidgley December 10, 2013 at 7:14 pm #

    such a sweetly told little piece 🙂

    • Tad December 21, 2013 at 7:19 pm #

      Thank you.

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